Songs In Progress - Episode 2

Okay, continuing on from last post about "Live On" - here's another rough mix with some added stuff! (Precocious drum, percussion, horns, keyboards, and of course, more guitars!) And - there's an "Easter egg" at the end! "Wait for it..."

And once again: Vocals, lyrics, instruments, you name it, subject to change! Watcha' think?
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10 comments

  • art b

    art b Rialto

    That was good, i like the rhythm a lot. Did u color the egg before you cracked it?

    That was good, i like the rhythm a lot. Did u color the egg before you cracked it?

  • Steve Probst

    Steve Probst

    Thank you ArtB. No but I think the song is taking on the shade of "spaghetti western".

    Thank you ArtB. No but I think the song is taking on the shade of "spaghetti western".

  • Freddy & Fred  :)    :)

    Freddy & Fred :) :) near Disney World, Orlando,FL.

    Got a "kick" out of your comment Steve that your song is taking on the shade of a "spaghetti western." That didn't come to mind when we were listening. Thought it was a catchy tune and We liked it!! It certainly has a good beat and ~flow~ and we found ourselves toe-tapping to Your song while working in our home office. The only thing that would make it better would be if we could see You perform it Live. Take care Steve and we always enjoy getting your monthly newsy updates. :) :)

    Got a "kick" out of your comment Steve that your song is taking on the shade of a "spaghetti western." That didn't come to mind when we were listening. Thought it was a catchy tune and We liked it!! It certainly has a good beat and ~flow~ and we found ourselves toe-tapping to Your song while working in our home office. The only thing that would make it better would be if we could see You perform it Live. Take care Steve and we always enjoy getting your monthly newsy updates. smile smile

  • Steve Probst

    Steve Probst

    Freddy & Fred, okay well then just a little "western" hold the meatballs! Thanks!!

    Freddy & Fred, okay well then just a little "western" hold the meatballs! Thanks!!

  • Carol A.

    Carol A. Toms River, New Jersey

    Love the melody AND the words, especially. For some reason, as I was listening to the words, I was wondering what it would sound like if you sang the same song, notes and all, as a slow ballad? Remember when Neil Sedaka took his song "Breaking up is Hard to do" and did that? It was beautiful. And of course I could listen to your voice forever anyway. I'm still hoping I can hear it in person live again someday!!

    Love the melody AND the words, especially. For some reason, as I was listening to the words, I was wondering what it would sound like if you sang the same song, notes and all, as a slow ballad? Remember when Neil Sedaka took his song "Breaking up is Hard to do" and did that? It was beautiful. And of course I could listen to your voice forever anyway. I'm still hoping I can hear it in person live again someday!!

  • Steve Probst

    Steve Probst

    Thank you Carol!

    Thank you Carol!

  • Pam n' Jeff

    Pam n' Jeff

    Jeff thought that it was good! I really liked it - I see it in a movie...beach setting, troubled person wrestling with God kind of scenario. Maybe I'm way off base...then again, maybe I just need another cup o' joe! ;) Keep up the good work my friend! We miss y'all!!

    Jeff thought that it was good! I really liked it - I see it in a movie...beach setting, troubled person wrestling with God kind of scenario. Maybe I'm way off base...then again, maybe I just need another cup o' joe! wink Keep up the good work my friend! We miss y'all!!

  • Steve Probst

    Steve Probst

    Pam n' Jeff, Thanks. Yes, definitely has a spiritual element to it on purpose. Living on figuratively and of course, spiritually.....pass the cream. :)

    Pam n' Jeff, Thanks. Yes, definitely has a spiritual element to it on purpose. Living on figuratively and of course, spiritually.....pass the cream. smile

  • Cindy

    Cindy Pennsylvania

    This song is just Beautiful! I Love it! To me, it has a "Phillip Phillips" sound to it. I love the sound of the ocean waves crashing to the shore in the background of it. Beautiful touch! When I listen to it, I visualize myself walking on the beach thinking about how to make every second of the rest of my life count. I would def. love to see you perform this song live someday in person. I would love to someday attend one of your solo gigs. I look forward to hearing the finished version of this song as well as more beautiful songs from you. Keep the beautiful music coming. :)

    This song is just Beautiful! I Love it! To me, it has a "Phillip Phillips" sound to it. I love the sound of the ocean waves crashing to the shore in the background of it. Beautiful touch! When I listen to it, I visualize myself walking on the beach thinking about how to make every second of the rest of my life count. I would def. love to see you perform this song live someday in person. I would love to someday attend one of your solo gigs. I look forward to hearing the finished version of this song as well as more beautiful songs from you. Keep the beautiful music coming. smile

  • Steve Probst

    Steve Probst

    Thank you Cindy!! Glad you like it.

    Thank you Cindy!! Glad you like it.

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