Some constructive industry came in recently for this song I pitched for a documentary about drinking water. The lyrics were said to be right on point. But the reasons it wasn't forward were as follows -
1. Wanted to hear more development in backing track and sooner
2. Wasn't crazy about the strings I used when accompaniment DID come in.
So I may let it sit for a bit. I could just leave it as-is when I have enough tunes done for an another album. ....Hmmm, when is another film coming around about the "driving force of all nature", to quote Mr. L. daVinci.
Feel free to comment on what YOU hear! :)